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When did I turn from "the most amazing woman you have ever known" into something completely meaningless?

The later tonight gets, the less sleepy I become and the more my thoughts turn to memories that I want to cling to with every ounce of strength I possess so they do not slip away.  I press my hand to my chest in the spot where my heart is aching and I sigh, then bite my lip and try to hold back the tears.

Your eyes, the bluest eyes I have ever found myself lost inside, I loved the way they always looked at me.  You devoured every inch of my body with those eyes, and although I acted bashful, I adored your attention.  There is nobody else I would rather have stood before naked and exposed, because I trusted that you saw the me beneath my flaws.  

Now, you are letting go.  Lately I have felt myself slipping away from you and back into the skin of the reckless girl I used to be.  The girl who would build something beautiful just to watch it break.  I am turning back into her, and part of me isn't sad about it.

You know, you aren't the only one who doesn't care if I breathe, you are just the only one whose cares mattered to me.
~
It's good to be somebody's whore
I've given you all and what for?
Somebody loves you...
more or less.

~
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soultrauma Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
that last sentence is right on! great writing...
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MySocksRock Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2012
:) Thank you
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Amanda-Graham Featured By Owner May 27, 2012  Professional Writer
I love you for this work ... so very much ... and yes ... her eyes WERE stunning though it was her jaw and nose I always kissed so lovingly. (smiles) here ... something to make you smile as I am right now [link]
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MySocksRock Featured By Owner May 27, 2012
Thank you so much for the compliment! And... Oh wow... that was awesome!!!! Thank you for showing me that it totally made me happy!!!! :)
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Amanda-Graham Featured By Owner May 27, 2012  Professional Writer
featured here: [link]
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MySocksRock Featured By Owner May 27, 2012
Thank you. :) :hug:
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LandSharkhdt Featured By Owner May 26, 2012  Hobbyist
I loved this :3
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MySocksRock Featured By Owner May 27, 2012
thank you so much! :)
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The-Most-Unclean Featured By Owner May 25, 2012
*wet my eyes*

beautifully written
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MySocksRock Featured By Owner May 25, 2012
Oh well thank you so much. :) :hug:
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