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A beautiful girl, a sight to behold.
An innocent smile, a heart of gold.
So begins the story, each time it is told.
The ending leaving you, bitter and cold.

Your “soulmate” leads you into her bed.
That’s how she traps you, with lovely legs spread.
Desire and lust dominate your head.
Spellbound you agree to whatever is said.

Her manipulations are a mastered art.  
As her trusting victim, you play the part.
She promises to love you with all her heart.
And with sick satisfaction she tears you apart.

From this trance you eventually awake.
That’s when you discover, trust is a mistake.
Your wonderful woman was a scheming snake.
Blinding you with her poison and taking all she could take.

You’re left alone, bitten and broke.
All you had, all you believed, all up in smoke.
Secretly wishing, you had never woke.
She made you love her, and her love was a joke.
I told my buddy NinjaB tonight that I was going to write an anti-woman poem because I write so many anti-man poems.  I am not a man hater, or a woman hater.  There are good men and there are good women, but there are really bad ones too!  So this is what I came up with and I am sorry for anyone out there who has been in a relationship like this. 

Just remember what the song says ... "Never trust a big butt and a smile"  ;)  lol  Hey I don't have either so y'all can trust me!!!   :)
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GoldenNocturna Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2014  Student Writer
Well, I see this as more of a cautionary tale than an 'anti-woman' one. I liked the rhythm and rhyme to it--almost like an Aesop's fable. XD -shot-
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TheDarkenedBride Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
"...The ending leaving you, bitter and cold..." 
you're right, it happens more often than it should. nice poem :)
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MySocksRock Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2014
Thank you very much. :)
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TheDarkenedBride Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
it was my pleasure :iconflowerforyouplz:
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nightshade-keyblade Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Like looking into a mirror. On one side, the man and on the other, the woman. Both of them have the same thing in common.
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MySocksRock Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2014
Interesting.
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nightshade-keyblade Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
As in, the qualities of the person in the poem are shared by women and men. The sexually manipulative man and the sexually manipulative woman are like mirror reflections of each other
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ReyRay Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh that last line was just owwwww...
Great job! I'm a girl but I can see where you're coming from. 
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MySocksRock Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2014
Thank you! :)
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ReyRay Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Np :3
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