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A beautiful girl, a sight to behold.
An innocent smile, a heart of gold.
So begins the story, each time it is told.
The ending leaving you, bitter and cold.

Your “soulmate” leads you into her bed.
That’s how she traps you, with lovely legs spread.
Desire and lust dominate your head.
Spellbound you agree to whatever is said.

Her manipulations are a mastered art.  
As her trusting victim, you play the part.
She promises to love you with all her heart.
And with sick satisfaction she tears you apart.

From this trance you eventually awake.
That’s when you discover, trust is a mistake.
Your wonderful woman was a scheming snake.
Blinding you with her poison and taking all she could take.

You’re left alone, bitten and broke.
All you had, all you believed, all up in smoke.
Secretly wishing, you had never woke.
She made you love her, and her love was a joke.
I told my buddy NinjaB tonight that I was going to write an anti-woman poem because I write so many anti-man poems.  I am not a man hater, or a woman hater.  There are good men and there are good women, but there are really bad ones too!  So this is what I came up with and I am sorry for anyone out there who has been in a relationship like this. 

Just remember what the song says ... "Never trust a big butt and a smile"  ;)  lol  Hey I don't have either so y'all can trust me!!!   :)
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GoldenNocturna Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2014  Student Writer
Well, I see this as more of a cautionary tale than an 'anti-woman' one. I liked the rhythm and rhyme to it--almost like an Aesop's fable. XD -shot-
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TheDarkenedBride Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
"...The ending leaving you, bitter and cold..." 
you're right, it happens more often than it should. nice poem :)
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:iconmysocksrock:
MySocksRock Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2014
Thank you very much. :)
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:iconthedarkenedbride:
TheDarkenedBride Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
it was my pleasure :iconflowerforyouplz:
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:iconnightshade-keyblade:
nightshade-keyblade Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Like looking into a mirror. On one side, the man and on the other, the woman. Both of them have the same thing in common.
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:iconmysocksrock:
MySocksRock Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2014
Interesting.
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:iconnightshade-keyblade:
nightshade-keyblade Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
As in, the qualities of the person in the poem are shared by women and men. The sexually manipulative man and the sexually manipulative woman are like mirror reflections of each other
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:iconreyray:
ReyRay Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh that last line was just owwwww...
Great job! I'm a girl but I can see where you're coming from. 
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:iconmysocksrock:
MySocksRock Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2014
Thank you! :)
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:iconreyray:
ReyRay Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Np :3
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:iconorientalarc:
OrientalArc Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2014  Hobbyist Interface Designer
it certainly meets its objective

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:iconidowwa:
idowwa Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
Im not that heartless but it it a lot like me
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:iconcontradictory55:
Contradictory55 Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2014  Student Writer
Wow... :heart: That's good.
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:iconmysocksrock:
MySocksRock Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2014
Thanks so much!  I didn't realize when I wrote it that so many people would enjoy it.  :)
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:iconcontradictory55:
Contradictory55 Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2014  Student Writer
:D You're welcome, and all your writing is enjoyable~
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:iconashbrie13:
Ashbrie13 Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2014  Student General Artist
interesting way to change the point of view, good job
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:iconmysocksrock:
MySocksRock Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2014
Thank you! :)
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:iconsegarocker21:
SegaRocker21 Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
That was awesome. Even though I'm a girl, I still think this is beautiful ^^. It's pretty sad, But true. People always think its the girl thats the victim in a relationship, but it can also be a guy.
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:iconmysocksrock:
MySocksRock Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2014
Seems that the good people, whether male or female, are always being taken advantage of and getting hurt. 
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:iconsegarocker21:
SegaRocker21 Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Truer words have never been spoken ^^!
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:icondarklover33:
DarkLover33 Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2014   Writer
wow this is really well written
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:iconmysocksrock:
MySocksRock Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2014
Thanks so much! :)
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:icondarklover33:
DarkLover33 Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2014   Writer
Your welcome :)
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:iconblacksilhoutte:
BlackSilhoutte Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Beautiful!
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:iconmysocksrock:
MySocksRock Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2014
Thank you! :)
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SilverShadowPheonix Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2014
Good structure. Great story. Good job.
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:iconmysocksrock:
MySocksRock Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2014
Thank you so much!
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:iconsilvershadowpheonix:
SilverShadowPheonix Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2014
welcome
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Prowling-Tigress Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2014
I really really liked this O:
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:iconmysocksrock:
MySocksRock Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2014
I am glad!  Thank you!
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:iconfullmor:
FullMor Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2014

beautiful, if she is real she is a b*tch

 

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:iconmysocksrock:
MySocksRock Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2014
:)  Thank you
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Snikkrz9 Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Impressive
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:iconmysocksrock:
MySocksRock Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2014
Thank you! :)
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:iconpolter6eist:
Polter6eist Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
It's a beautiful poem. And I don't believe it is anti-woman :)
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:iconmysocksrock:
MySocksRock Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2014
Thanks so much :)
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:iconjimmymyself:
jimmymyself Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2014
So very painful. Great job writing this!
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:iconmysocksrock:
MySocksRock Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2014
Thank you :)
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:iconalucard6662:
alucard6662 Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2014
May I post this to my Facebook page , and share it with my friends ?

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:iconmysocksrock:
MySocksRock Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2014
Yes.
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:iconalucard6662:
alucard6662 Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2014
Great poem

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:iconmysocksrock:
MySocksRock Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2014
Thank you :)
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:iconcaptaincaspian:
CaptainCaspian Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Kate Argent and Derek Hale popped into mind on that one. .-.
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:iconmysocksrock:
MySocksRock Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2014
:)  Thanks!
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Baby-DaisyFan-Foxy Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2014
This is amazing, so well wriiten and just speaks so much. I can sadly relate to this, this just screams one of my exes. A mistake that should have never happened, now I'm scarred for life, things that can never be erased, permanently imprinted into my memories.
Makes you wish people weren't like this, but its a sad truth, and will probably never change.
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MySocksRock Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2014
I am sorry that your experience with your ex has hurt you.  It's unfortunate that people can just damage others for their own gain and not even care about what they have done.  I hope you can one day find peace with your memories.  Thank you for reading.  :)
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Baby-DaisyFan-Foxy Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2014
You're welcome, it was a wonderful piece.
Thanks, and I have a bit, it happened years a ago so time has slowly healed the deep wounds.
And now being with someone 50x better, for which we have just celebrated our lovely 2yr anniversary and still as happy as when we first met.
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:iconmysocksrock:
MySocksRock Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2014
Awww congrats on that!
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:iconbaby-daisyfan-foxy:
Baby-DaisyFan-Foxy Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2014
Thanks :hug:
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GhostOfTheEmptyGrave Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2014
I guess some people are just twisted and evil, no matter the gender.
And this is really well written. I love how it flows.
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