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Standing on the edge,
of the world, looking down.
Suddenly I'm falling.
I'm falling towards the ground.

The clouds are shrinking fast.
My stomach is all twisted.
The road closes in,
but somehow I miss it.

Just before I hit,
before I crush my head,
my eyes quickly open.
My body hits my bed.

Lying in the dark,
my heart races fast.
My thoughts turn to you,
to us, to our past.

The lost boy you once were,
begging for my healing.
The way you captured my heart,
when I had no interest in feeling.

It was like a dream.

Abandoned house, I'm alone.
Searching, but for who?
Someone whose no longer there.
Someone I once knew.

I miss this person desperately
I can feel it in my bones,
but the search finds nothing.
No end to being alone.

The house begins to shrink,
as this feeling closes in.
I open up my mouth,
and the silent screams begin.

When you chose to leave me,
Did it hurt for you as well?
Or am I the only one,
living in this empty cell?

This pain, it stays with me,
night after lonely night.
Only you can end it,
there's no end in sight.

You're just a dream.
Yeah I rhymed... Imagine that.
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KingfisherSilentArmy Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
This a really well written rhyme! I like how you've put your emotions into it makes it stand out.
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MySocksRock Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2014
Thank you so much, I really appreciate that.
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KingfisherSilentArmy Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
It's no problem :)
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DragonsChest Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2013  Professional Writer
Poetry that touches the heart and stirs the soul. :heart:
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MySocksRock Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2013
Thank you so much my friend.
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DragonsChest Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2013  Professional Writer
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Contradictory55 Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2013  Student Writer
You rhymed... and I agree with ~TurquoiseIllusion it is beautiful and I want your pain to be finite and your joy to be infinite because dreaming is nothing compared to reality :tighthug:
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MySocksRock Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2013
awww :) Thank you!!!!
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Contradictory55 Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2013  Student Writer
:glomp:
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TurquoiseIllusion Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2013
I love it... it is beautiful, like your soul... I wish I could take away your pain, and make you smile again...
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