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Restrained by insecurity, she is hard to love.
Her heart however, hides a passion unknown.
An unforeseen utopia, and still so much more.
The problem, huge hearts make easy targets.

The strategy is simple though, easy to learn.
Follow this formula and you'll find your forever.
Hold her tight through all of the happy times,
and the fighting and the anger, don't let go.

If you feel her falling take her hand in yours.
When you feel like she is letting go, catch her.
Protect her with your arms when she is scared.
When she is sad, especially then, don't let go.

Don't let her walk away, even if she wants to.
Bravery is an act, nobody wants to be alone.
It will take work, but the reward is her heart.
And she will treasure you, but don't ever let go.
I know a thing or two about women who are hard to love, and what they really need.

For ~insignificantone
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DragonsChest Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2012  Professional Writer
Can feel the emotion in this one...
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MySocksRock Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2012
Thank you so much :)
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DragonsChest Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2012  Professional Writer
:iconawesome-plz::iconwelcome1plz::iconwelcome2plz::iconwelcome3plz::iconwelcome4plz::iconawesome-plz:
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perfectlyimperfect19 Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
love it :D
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MySocksRock Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2012
Thank you so much!
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perfectlyimperfect19 Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome dear :)
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LionLance Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2012
Your poetic skill is great. However, women like the one in your poem don't exist. My personal experience is that women just use you for your affection and then just throw you away for something better when they are done. Not quite the sensitive and loving creatures that they claim to be. But once again, you are a great poet. Just write about something that's actually real next time ok ^_^
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MySocksRock Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2012
Lol, okay. My bad.
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LionLance Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2012
Hi, err... This is rather embarrassing, but please do disregard what I said about the female half of our race. As I'm sure you've noticed, things involving women have not been too great with me and I was having a rather unpleasant day. Keep doing what you're doing, your poetry is very good. Peace be upon you, wherever you may be.
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MySocksRock Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2012
No worries.
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